This is a rough draft for a story that i am writing. Could someone please read this and tell me some feedback? Thank you for your help. This is the story:
Children of Destiny
What happened to the world? There used to be children playing in yards and swimming in the pools in the summer time. Trees used to sway in the breeze and lose the leaves that covered their branches in the winter time. The sky used to be blue with hope of a new day and new love. Now the children no longer play in the yard, the trees will never let their leaves fall and the sky is dark with hopelessness and pain. If you are reading this, then it means that I have failed to save everyone.
He has taken the world for himself and now all hope is lost. My story is not a happy…
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